Chris Coen ([info]clarentine) wrote,
@ 2009-02-11 12:57:00
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Entry tags:canum, rewrite

Make it hurt, damn it
Note to self from the middle of this novel's climax:

Chasing two armed men, you definitely go armed yourself, and while these may be lower-rank Orators they won’t be idiots--this is not a MUNCLE episode, and they are not stupid Thrushes. Give them credit for native intelligence and survival instincts!


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[info]mnfaure
2009-02-11 07:32 pm UTC (link)
Hear, hear! Worth foes make your hero worthy, too. :P

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[info]clarentine
2009-02-11 07:39 pm UTC (link)
*g* Canum is so going to hate me when this book is done.

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[info]mnfaure
2009-02-11 08:14 pm UTC (link)
Is that how you measure the success of a book? :D

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[info]clarentine
2009-02-11 08:24 pm UTC (link)
I think I measure success by how many people tell me they cried--or winced, or said ouch, or whatever--for the characters' pain. *g*

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[info]mnfaure
2009-02-11 08:39 pm UTC (link)
That's probably be a better yardstick. In my book it is anyway. *g*

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